Essay

Overall I feel that I did very well on my essay. I need to work on further analysis of my quotes and more quotes. The one thing I am missing in my essay is that I do not have enough quotes; ergo, I will add more quotes and really analyzing each quote in detail. I also need to narrow my topics down adn really relate back to the thesis because the thesis is the most important part of any essay. In conclusion with my newfound knowledge I will definately do much better on my next essay.