My essay

I have strengths in my sentence writing, my clarity of style, and my understanding of Darcy and Elizabeth's true love. I could improve on my sentence writing by really making my sentences more complex and more grammatically correct. I did have a comma splice error in my essay. As for my clarity of style I tend to make things as clear as possible so people will not be misunderstand what I am trying to say. I do understand how Darcy and Elizabeth's true love can conquer all and none can hinder the journey of their love. However, I do need to improve on correlating the body paragraphs to the conclusion and introduction. I also need to improve of further emphasizing and analyzing my points and arguments. I more so need to improve my topic sentences, introduction, and conclusion. Once I have improved on all of these points my essay will finally be more essay ready.