Monday, September 20, 2010
R2D2
D2 was by far the best essay out of the three I read. I read B2, C2, and D2. B2 and C2 were good. I enjoyed reading all three. B2 had a good introduction and a good conclusion; however, the body paragraphs did not directly correlate to the thesis. The body paragraphs were not bad by any means, they just did not correlate well enough. C2 also was a good introduction, I was hooked onto the read. The ending of C2 was also good. But, I did not enjoy the body paragraphs as much; nonetheless, they did correlate with the thesis. Although the body paragraphs went along with the thesis, the correlation of body paragraphs to thesis was not strong enough nor was it very well written. Therefore D2 which was eloquently put together. The sophistication, complexity, and great diction of D2 was absolutely amazing. D2 was truly the best out of the three. From the great introduction to the superb conclusion, all of the paragraphs were well put together and correlated well with each other. D2 was very well written. I loved the diction D2 used and how smoothly D2 incorporated the quotes. D2 truly underscored the value of Mr. Hurst in the book. D2 is the best of the three.
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